5 Daily Literacy - Holiday Post

Title of Book/Date

Enemy Pie

19/04/16

Tuesday/April/2016

A boy called Jeremy Ross just moved in the neighborhood next to Stanley. And Stanley’s friend is a little bit jealous.Jeremy Ross had a trampoline party and invited Stanley and everyone else but Stanley's friend. His best friend has a tree - house and a enemy list, Jeremy Ross was the only enemy on his list.Dad had a secret recipe to get rid of enemies. And the next day Stanley’s best friend had to hang out with Jeremy Ross for one day and bring him over for dinner.

Rate and Why

⅚ *****/******

After hanging out with his enemy Jeremy Ross he had no enemies after all.

5 Daily Literacy - Holiday Post

Title of Book/Date

Rainbow Fish

18/4/16

Monday/April/2016

5 sentence summary

Rainbow fish is a beautiful fish in the ocean.One day a little blue fish asked rainbow fish for 1 little scale but rainbow fish said no.And after that day nobody talked to him even when he goes past they look away.So the octupus told him to share his scales with everyone.Then later that day the little blue fish came again and said “Rainbow Fish can I have one of your scales please”. Rainbow fish gave him the littlest scale then he watched the little blue fish run around him with excitement.

Rate and Why

4/4  ****/****

At the end he gave one scale each to everyone.

Best Writing Of 2016!!

The reason why this is my best piece of writing is because. . . . . . . . .

• I used some interesting words
• I used Punctuation marks
• Because this was my first Narrative Writing

 

There is a storm, it was a howling windy day and Jesus disciples were in the boat.

But on that day Jesus went to the hill because he wanted to go and Pray for a little while. After all that tiring business he went straight into a lake, then his Disciples shouted “ IT’S A GHOST, IT’S A GHOST!”. Then Jesus replied “ Don’t Be Afraid “ then all his disciples told him if he was the Son Of God then call me to come to the water.

A few minutes later Jesus told him to come and after that I got off the boat and started walking towards the water. He saw that there was a storm coming towards them, then he started to sink to the bottom of the Lake. A few seconds later Jesus went straight to him and picked him up and then they both went back into the boat.

After Jesus saved us I said “ Thank You So Much “ then the Disciples started to worship him.

Math Problem

Learn: I learned how to use screencastify
Creation:Solve a maths problem

The Easter Story

Soul Friend

Thursday 17 March 2016

SOUL FRIEND

 

A Soul friend is a friendship or like having a little brother and a little sister.We kind of have the same in common like loving to read with them, Or love to write with them, We like to comfort each other and make sure we feel safe.

My Soul friends name is Jireh & Patrick they are both 7 years old  turning 8 this year. Jireh is very talented at singing and likes to read. But when I look at patrick I find him very attracted to eating & disturb people from anything that surrounded  him.

Soul friend is a relationship that is between an older person and a younger person.It came from the Irish Holy Faith Sisters that started our school 58 years ago which was made for people who came here.  

We need a soul friend because they need us to look out for them.They come to us and hang out with us.

Jesus is tested in the wilderness