“Come on Mike lets go to the beach” said mum but Mike was sleeping so then when mum called him again as loud as she could he woke up and got changed. After that when Mike got changed he went outside and said “can I invite my friends too?”and Mum said “of course”. Mum went to go and pick up Mike’s friends from their houses. They all went together and went swimming. Mike and his friends ran and jumped into the ocean. Mike’s mum was just sitting down and reading her book.
Kanesini this is a good beginning to your narrative but when you only have 20 minutes to show your skills in writing a narrative you need to try and finish the whole story. Make sure you try to get your full story completed in the 20 minutes given.
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