Sunday, 24 April 2016

Letter to - Aurthur - holiday post

Dear ,Michelle Knudsen

My name is Kanesini, I live in New Zealand, I am 12 years of age and go to St Pius X Catholic School, in Glen Innes.

I am writing this letter to you about my thoughts to the book you were reading.

I have read your book Library Lion.If I were to rate about this book I would give it a 5/5 because I find this book very interesting. I thought it was interesting because I never expected a Lion to love reading and that really loves going to the library so much.

I found your book very appropriate for kids and fun to read.It was awesome because at the end the Lion got to come back to the library again.  

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Tuesday, 19 April 2016

5 Daily Literacy - Holiday Post

Title of Book/Date
Enemy Pie

A boy called Jeremy Ross just moved in the neighborhood next to Stanley. And Stanley’s friend is a little bit jealous.Jeremy Ross had a trampoline party and invited Stanley and everyone else but Stanley's friend. His best friend has a tree - house and a enemy list, Jeremy Ross was the only enemy on his list.Dad had a secret recipe to get rid of enemies. And the next day Stanley’s best friend had to hang out with Jeremy Ross for one day and bring him over for dinner.

Rate and Why
⅚ *****/******

After hanging out with his enemy Jeremy Ross he had no enemies after all.

5 Daily Literacy - Holiday Post

Title of Book/Date

5 sentence summary

Rainbow fish is a beautiful fish in the ocean.One day a little blue fish asked rainbow fish for 1 little scale but rainbow fish said no.And after that day nobody talked to him even when he goes past they look away.So the octupus told him to share his scales with everyone.Then later that day the little blue fish came again and said “Rainbow Fish can I have one of your scales please”. Rainbow fish gave him the littlest scale then he watched the little blue fish run around him with excitement.

Rate and Why
4/4  ****/****
At the end he gave one scale each to everyone.

Thursday, 14 April 2016

Best Writing Of 2016!!

The reason why this is my best piece of writing is because. . . . . . . . .
  • I used some interesting words
  • I used Punctuation marks
  • Because this was my first Narrative Writing


There is a storm, it was a howling windy day and Jesus disciples were in the boat.

But on that day Jesus went to the hill because he wanted to go and Pray for a little while. After all that tiring business he went straight into a lake, then his Disciples shouted “ IT’S A GHOST, IT’S A GHOST!”. Then Jesus replied “ Don’t Be Afraid “ then all his disciples told him if he was the Son Of God then call me to come to the water.

A few minutes later Jesus told him to come and after that I got off the boat and started walking towards the water. He saw that there was a storm coming towards them, then he started to sink to the bottom of the Lake. A few seconds later Jesus went straight to him and picked him up and then they both went back into the boat.

After Jesus saved us I said “ Thank You So Much “ then the Disciples started to worship him.

Monday, 4 April 2016

Math Problem

Learn: I learned how to use screencastify
Creation:Solve a maths problem