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Tuesday, 31 May 2016

The science Roadshow experience

Science Show
Hopping into Joshua’s car was exciting.  We’re on our way to a Science Road Show at Tamaki college. I haven’t been to a science roadshow before.  Once we got  there, Room7 and Room5  lined up waiting to go  in.  It was freezing cold but I couldn't wait.

Inside the hall, there were different stations with different science experiment.  I like the wave experiment the best.  I got to see how the waves were followed by another.  There was a station where I see how earthquake work.

We had to watch a experiment about sound.  I learnt that loud sound or noise can damage my ears.  I learnt new vocabulary such as sound frequency.  I can see how sound travel very fast in the air.


I really enjoy going to the Science RoadShow and now I know what it means.  Lots and lots of science experiment and experiences. 

Friday, 6 May 2016

My Mother


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Mothers are hard workers for all of us. They help us when we are in need, they are always there to encourage us. Mothers are very helpful and loving.

My mum is beautiful, kind and helpful.She is a loving person that will never let go of us.I love my mother no matter what.She is there when my life get’s down,she is a mother with a very big heart full of love to her children.She is a mother of 10 unique  kids that love her so much.

My mother has been there for me ever since day one,she gave me strength, God made her smile of the sunshine.In her cheeks,fair rose .In her eye’s God placed bright shining stars and he moulded her heart of pure gold.

You are my superhero, you're my friend, you are my sunshine that kisses my booboo’s braids my hair……………. I  YOU MUM no matter what.

Holiday writing

On friday afternoon my cousins and I went to the movies to watch the Jungle book.It’s about a little boy called mowgli who was an orphaned human boy,raised by a family of wolves.He was guided by his animal guardians.

Mowgli had to leave the only home he has ever known when the frightened tiger Shere khan let goes of his roar.Guided by a panther and a bear.

The young boy meets all different jungle animals also a python snake and a very big fat talking ape.

At the end Mowgli brings the red flower (which is fire), and it surrounded everywhere in the jungle and shere khan tries to kill Mowgli and Mowgli jumped and Shere Khan fell off the tree and landed on the red flower.

Sunday, 24 April 2016

Letter to - Aurthur - holiday post

Dear ,Michelle Knudsen


My name is Kanesini, I live in New Zealand, I am 12 years of age and go to St Pius X Catholic School, in Glen Innes.


I am writing this letter to you about my thoughts to the book you were reading.


I have read your book Library Lion.If I were to rate about this book I would give it a 5/5 because I find this book very interesting. I thought it was interesting because I never expected a Lion to love reading and that really loves going to the library so much.


I found your book very appropriate for kids and fun to read.It was awesome because at the end the Lion got to come back to the library again.  

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Tuesday, 19 April 2016

5 Daily Literacy - Holiday Post

Title of Book/Date
Enemy Pie
19/04/16
Tuesday/April/2016

A boy called Jeremy Ross just moved in the neighborhood next to Stanley. And Stanley’s friend is a little bit jealous.Jeremy Ross had a trampoline party and invited Stanley and everyone else but Stanley's friend. His best friend has a tree - house and a enemy list, Jeremy Ross was the only enemy on his list.Dad had a secret recipe to get rid of enemies. And the next day Stanley’s best friend had to hang out with Jeremy Ross for one day and bring him over for dinner.

Rate and Why
⅚ *****/******

After hanging out with his enemy Jeremy Ross he had no enemies after all.

5 Daily Literacy - Holiday Post

Title of Book/Date
18/4/16
Monday/April/2016


5 sentence summary

Rainbow fish is a beautiful fish in the ocean.One day a little blue fish asked rainbow fish for 1 little scale but rainbow fish said no.And after that day nobody talked to him even when he goes past they look away.So the octupus told him to share his scales with everyone.Then later that day the little blue fish came again and said “Rainbow Fish can I have one of your scales please”. Rainbow fish gave him the littlest scale then he watched the little blue fish run around him with excitement.

Rate and Why
4/4  ****/****
At the end he gave one scale each to everyone.

Thursday, 14 April 2016

Best Writing Of 2016!!

The reason why this is my best piece of writing is because. . . . . . . . .
  • I used some interesting words
  • I used Punctuation marks
  • Because this was my first Narrative Writing


 

There is a storm, it was a howling windy day and Jesus disciples were in the boat.

But on that day Jesus went to the hill because he wanted to go and Pray for a little while. After all that tiring business he went straight into a lake, then his Disciples shouted “ IT’S A GHOST, IT’S A GHOST!”. Then Jesus replied “ Don’t Be Afraid “ then all his disciples told him if he was the Son Of God then call me to come to the water.

A few minutes later Jesus told him to come and after that I got off the boat and started walking towards the water. He saw that there was a storm coming towards them, then he started to sink to the bottom of the Lake. A few seconds later Jesus went straight to him and picked him up and then they both went back into the boat.

After Jesus saved us I said “ Thank You So Much “ then the Disciples started to worship him.